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Phrases and script

5 phrases.

You know how they treat me around here?
Said at work in a discussion between a manager and a manager in training.

Can you strike that from the record?
Said in the line at the small starbucks on Iusb campus about something that was said wrong during a previous conversation in the current conversation.

I didn't just destroy game I nuked it.
When talking about how he admitted going in taking away credits from a whole game just because he didn't like how the park was running game.

INT. RECORDING STUDIO - DAY

Abby takes off her headsets and sets them down frustrated. She walks to the recording booth door and into were the mixer is. Frank is standing there looking at her.

FRANK

Gees what is it this time Abby. That take was flawless. We are already behind schedule as it is.

Abby

I know Frank it is just I am not sure about this song being a track on this album. We are releasing two albums at the same time. I feel it would be a much better fit for the other album.

Frank

How many times do I need to go over this with you, Abigail. It is a bonus track that we will be hiding on the album as a thank you to your fans.

Abby

But it is a great song Frankie and I think it deserve to be more than a hidden track on the A disk of an album.

Frank lets out a sigh and thinks for a minute.

Frank

Tell you what. Let’s listen to it one more time. If it resonates with me then I won’t strike it from the record. If I am still not convinced afterward then it stays a hidden track.

Abby

Thanks, Frank you won’t regret it.

Frank spins in his chair and then plays the recording so they can both hear it. He pauses for a minute and then lets out a sigh.

Frank

Alright Abby, I guess I agree this is a brilliant song. We will put it as the first song on the second disk. Now can we please get back to recording. It is almost 1 in the afternoon and I want to get one more song in before lunch.