Well done! I could really tell you were happy with what you showed in your video. I think it could have shown more happiness if you added a few more things, but your point got across.
Overall good theme. I like where you trying to go with it. I would have liked to see your shots more centered because you cut off a lot of the headroom you should have, which makes it very distracting to watch.
Nice portrayal of the emotion! I just wish that the shots you were in included your entire face. Also, the shot in the car is out of focus and I would have liked to see it sharper.
I wish you would've focused the shot in the car better. Focusing on the radio wouldv'e been better because you wouldn't feel so distant. Also, fading the music out helps make the ending not so abrupt.
Good music choice. The thing that could have improved it immeasurably would have been focusing on your face. Seeing your face without being cut off would have conveyed the feeling moreso overall.
I'm not sure that I get happiness necessarily... More silly in my opinion. I liked the humor in the middle. One improvement I would consider is cutting the shot at the end. It seemed too long of a shot with nothing happening.
I think the music should have played through the whole thing even through the dancing Groot or at least you should have faded the music because it is a bit jarring when the music stops and starts again.
Your portrayal of happiness really shows in your acting. The shot with the stuffed animal really was the shot that showed the emotion best. I do like the shot with Groot, it was pretty funny.
I actually like how you cut out to use the dancing Groot and his music; I would just suggest trying to get a little closer for the sound (maybe keep the recording you have, and rerecord the music closer so it matches the level of the rest of the music). The end cuts out rather abruptly, maybe try a slow fade out. Nonetheless, you did a nice job on showing what makes you happy.
The music makes me feel happy so as far as conveying the emotion you did a pretty good job. I had a hard time connecting some of the scenes however, the last one in particular.
Well done! I could really tell you were happy with what you showed in your video. I think it could have shown more happiness if you added a few more things, but your point got across.
ReplyDeleteGood shots, I loved the toys. You video was very well put together.
ReplyDeleteOverall good theme. I like where you trying to go with it. I would have liked to see your shots more centered because you cut off a lot of the headroom you should have, which makes it very distracting to watch.
ReplyDeleteNice portrayal of the emotion! I just wish that the shots you were in included your entire face. Also, the shot in the car is out of focus and I would have liked to see it sharper.
ReplyDeleteI wish you would've focused the shot in the car better. Focusing on the radio wouldv'e been better because you wouldn't feel so distant. Also, fading the music out helps make the ending not so abrupt.
ReplyDeleteI understood your emotion. I think some of the clips you used might have been a little blurry.
ReplyDeleteLove the music choice and dancing Groot. However, some of the shots seemed odd when only part of this were in view or not in the center.
ReplyDeleteGood music choice. The thing that could have improved it immeasurably would have been focusing on your face. Seeing your face without being cut off would have conveyed the feeling moreso overall.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure that I get happiness necessarily... More silly in my opinion. I liked the humor in the middle. One improvement I would consider is cutting the shot at the end. It seemed too long of a shot with nothing happening.
ReplyDeleteI think the music should have played through the whole thing even through the dancing Groot or at least you should have faded the music because it is a bit jarring when the music stops and starts again.
ReplyDeleteYour portrayal of happiness really shows in your acting. The shot with the stuffed animal really was the shot that showed the emotion best. I do like the shot with Groot, it was pretty funny.
ReplyDeleteI actually like how you cut out to use the dancing Groot and his music; I would just suggest trying to get a little closer for the sound (maybe keep the recording you have, and rerecord the music closer so it matches the level of the rest of the music). The end cuts out rather abruptly, maybe try a slow fade out. Nonetheless, you did a nice job on showing what makes you happy.
ReplyDeleteThe music makes me feel happy so as far as conveying the emotion you did a pretty good job. I had a hard time connecting some of the scenes however, the last one in particular.
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